Dead Store Page 1

in all honesty so far so good, but I must ask did you write this storyline before you drew it out
the art work is beautiful as well
although you seem to have focused more on the character then the actual background. try adding a little more detail to the cracks and blood splatters
on another note good dialogue so far but you could have added a little more detail on setting
for example: "looking at the broken objects, glass all over the floor, and the smell of decay floating around the room; it was obvious to say something went horribly wrong"